Anastasia Slash

This whole thing sounds like one big bad brainfart and I've never ever regreted reading a book so bad... till this very moment.

I really love romance and erotic books, but holly shit this was the worst thing I've ever read. And I've read some really bad things on Wattpad.

But from where should I start?

Firstly, I hated this ironic tone, with which the author was making fun of the genre, caricaturing it.

Then we shall move on to the bad writing? No one uses words like "digits" for fingers, and "member", "massive", "fleshy organ" or "hardness" for dick. No one wants to get digited, they want to get fingered. Props for imagination though. These are some weird words for private parts.

The bad woman anatomy? This is a real quote from this thing, which can't even be called a story "Freaking hell, I slide my legs together to stop my naughty nectar from flooding the kitchen floor". Like, did she pee herself, cause this obviously wasn't arousal?

The weird conversations? The father tells his friend the "hero" he needs to protect his virgin daughter from someone.

Then further in, the same hero asks her if she is a virgin. How does that makes sense?

And let's not miss the constant humming. Every second word is "hmmm"

Another point - the heroine knows the hero has a huge dick, even though she has never seen him naked.

This thing needs major editing (bad punctuations, lack of configuration between tenses (moves from present to past, no connection between sentences), and this author needs to consider writing another genre, cause obviously Erotica is not her thing.… (plus d'informations)

Chloe is interviewing for a baker's job at an exotic bakery. Her friend, Lisa, goes along on the interview to chaperone as she is a cynic and believes she knows what Chloe's boss-to-be will be like. When Chloe gets the job, Lisa thinks maybe she was wrong but was willing to see. Chloe begins her job before Christmas. When Hunter, her boss, finds out she will be alone for Christmas, he invites her to his home. She declines but is then asked to go check on a cake they made and delivered as the client is not happy. When she gets to the party, her fantasies are about to be fulfilled. Will she give in to her fantasies?

I liked this story. The beginning was good, but the ending was way too fast. I liked Chloe and Hunter. I liked their professionalism, but Hunter got tired of waiting. I felt like my head was spinning at how fast Hunter moved at the Christmas party. I would have liked to see the story fleshed out more.

Once again, while I liked the story and characters, the grammar left a lot to be desired. Punctuation marks were needed--commas, quotation marks, periods--to denote dialog. Correct words needed to be used. Spelling needed check without using spell check--spelling might be right but if it is the wrong word that does not help the story. I hope she will get a proofreader and editor for future books. This could have been a 5.… (plus d'informations)

Emma watches as her neighbors move in. She loves when they come over and introduce themselves. Fun and games come with them.

This story has potential. It is too short for a plot or characters to be developed. It is hot. This does need editing and proofreading as there are typos, grammar errors, and sentence structure problems. There is one area after the men come to her apartment that becomes confusing. I hope she hires an editor and proofreader as I like her writing and look forward to a more polished product.… (plus d'informations)