I got a free copy of this book in exchange for a fair review.
I think that the story is basically a good one. 12 and 13 year old brother and sister, Zoey and Coda, go through a portal in the woods where they cross over into a magical land and physically become their spirit animals. There are many other animals there, and all of them can speak. It turns out that there is a war going on between the Purelight citizens (they are what they sound like, the good guys)and the Dims. All of the animals are born with a jewel in their forehead. The jewels of the Purelights are brightly colored, but when one becomes a Dim (like turning to the Dark Side), their jewels become dull and without luster. They live in shadows. Their leader is a big lizard, aptly named Crepus.
When Zoey and Coda arrive, they soon find out that they are very special, and that they are needed in particular. Luckily, their parents won't have much time to wonder where their children are because time passes differently there. What may be hours or even days in Ohm Totem will only be mere moments in our land.
I won't say anymore about the story but will just share my thoughts. I think the premise is very good. What kid doesn't already dream about going into the woods and turning into an animal? And the animals are lovely and kind (well, the Purelights are). The villains are subtle and mesmerizing. Coda and Zoey usually do not get along very well, as is often true with siblings. When they are in this situation, they realize that they love each other, must work together and help each other in order to succeed and survive.
I could not help but wonder if the book wasn't too long for the target age group, which I believe is 12-16 or so. I also thought that the siblings acted more like ages 8 and 9 rather than 12 and 13. They even shared a room, which was explained, but is still a little odd. I think that this is basically a well written story with just those small sticking points for me! Thank you for letting me read it and I am interested to see what else you may have out! ( )

I could not finish this book. I could not relate to the main characters, the children nor the introductory fantasy creatures. The narrative and tone of the book seemed to me to preach to the children and the reader. The story as it was developing did not engage me. I cannot recommend this book.

This is a magical tale of two children on an adventure. A brother and sister set off to the forest and come across some of the strangest and unusual things. The magical journey begins with just a small journey away from home.

I highly recommend this for lots of readers and I'm sure you'll all enjoy it. ( )

Innovative storyline with engaging charactors most in animal form. Zoey and her brother certainly landed themselves into an advanture of a unique nature. enjoyed book 1 waiting for b2
carmenmaranda ( )

A good book to read to children, touching on morals and insecurities, love over hatred, peace over war, in a fantasy setting, and the beginning of a quest, it will be interesting to see where this series heads next! ( )