Photo de l'auteur
9 oeuvres 10 utilisateurs 1 Critiques

Œuvres de Sophie Sin

Étiqueté

Partage des connaissances

Nom canonique
Sin, Sophie
Professions
author

Membres

Critiques

Went on a quick stroll through free things on Smashwords. Somewhat randomly picked up stuff.

Story begins abruptly with a woman in a forest for a "stress relief" vacation. Includes two other women, Jenifer and Kimmy, and a man.

"You are convicted of having a bush in the bush," the tall man says from where he is leaning against a tree watching my naked body with the type of interest usual reserved for good meals or more beautiful women. "How do you plead?"

Convicted of having a bush . . .. Lamest excuse I've heard to strip a woman down in the outdoors and do stuff wiht her. But, meh.

hmms. So, the two women who are not the narrator are model beautiful, while the man is hung like a horse.

For her crime of having a bush in the bush, the woman is stripped (before the story started), had her bush shaved off (in the story), is beaten by a branch (in the story), had a hand shoved into her and pounded by it, and . . . stuff.

And then over. Hmms. Just a quick little scene. Some things got tossed in that characterized the main character more, but everyone else is just there to use the woman.

I'm not entirely sure how to rate something that is just a sex scene and nothing more.
… (plus d'informations)
 
Signalé
Lexxi | May 29, 2015 |

Statistiques

Œuvres
9
Membres
10
Popularité
#908,816
Évaluation
½ 2.6
Critiques
1
ISBN
4