Angel Sefer

I hate giving bad reviews, but this 1/2 star book needed a LOT of work. A beta reader would've been a great help in fixing the confusing plot. There were so many nondescript characters and names that half the time I didn't know who was who, or what in the world was going on. Half the dialogue was ridiculous, meaningless filler. The other half was over-dramatic and forced. I was tempted to start a drinking game every time I read "What now?"

I never did understand what Jackie hoped to accomplish by visiting the mansion on her uncle's behalf. If she was trespassing and worried about being caught by the police, why did she bring food to stock the fridge and plan to stay a few days? And she does this just after a miraculous recovery from a car wreck. That's just one example of the conflicting information contained in this book. I got that she (and Michael) were searching for the man responsible for killing the Demiris heirs, but Jackie was hopelessly stupid and repeatedly walked right into danger. Don't get me started on how many times she swooned and fainted away from the stress she put herself in.

I actually felt a little sorry for Michael having to save her...over and over and over... The romance was non-existent and the law enforcement came across like keystone cops. The action was unrealistic and everything moved to fast. As a reader I need a chance to breathe and absorb what's happening. This read like a bad fanfic and I was really disappointed. From the summary, I had expected so much better. Thankfully I only spent 99 cents on it.… (plus d'informations)