Jon Oregon

The writing needs more finesse. The events were loosely sewn together, and I felt like a child wrote this book because children are not quite able to build suspense and make the journey just as important as the event itself. There wasn't any valuable lesson other than "you can get out of any situation with a magical bag and therefore don't need to think about consequences." Unclear is also why this monkey tribe was this intellectually advanced. At first, I thought it was customary in the story that animals could talk, but once humans came into the story, it obviously wasn't. And where did the magic bag come from? Overall, there is a lot of work to be done for this book to become successful.… (plus d'informations)