Jon Messenger
Auteur de Wolves of the Northern Rift
A propos de l'auteur
Crédit image: via author's site
Séries
Œuvres de Jon Messenger
Card Tricks 1 exemplaire
Working time and the future of work 1 exemplaire
Apatura Iris (Magic & Machinery #4) 1 exemplaire
Étiqueté
Partage des connaissances
- Date de naissance
- 1979
- Sexe
- male
- Nationalité
- UK
USA - Lieu de naissance
- London, England, UK
- Études
- University of Southern California (2002)
- Professions
- army officer
writer - Organisations
- U.S. Army
Membres
Critiques
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Prix et récompenses
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Statistiques
- Œuvres
- 19
- Membres
- 343
- Popularité
- #69,543
- Évaluation
- 3.6
- Critiques
- 15
- ISBN
- 24
- Langues
- 1
I feel like this could be a good concept, both as a steam punk and mythological creature entry. But the execution leaves much to be desired. There's showing, there's details for details sake, then there's extraneous details that really are pointless unless it's unusual.
The story has a good germ beneath, but the layers of extensive wordiness just bury the concept. There are also points where the Point of View (POV) shifts mid-paragraph between Simon and Luthor, which tends to come across as jarring. I gave up at the end of Chapter 9.… (plus d'informations)