T. C. HuoCritiques

The style was stilted. While the story had some interesting elements, I believe its pace could have been more engaging. with altering momentum and more tension-propelled movement. The emotional and psychological parts of the story were too measured or flat. I felt he was telling me that this happened or that occured rather than showing me and luring me into his created world(s). This was the author's first book and do hope he continues to work on his craft. There is potential here.