R J Cnote
Auteur de Your Wife Will Pay: Psychic Suspense
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Your Wife Will Pay: Psychic Suspense par R J Cnote
Cette critique a été rédigée pour LibraryThing Member Giveaways.
Interesting plot but very hard to read with the bad grammar, spelling, and lack of differentiation between who is talking and who isn't. I spent more time re-reading it to understand what was going on instead of focusing on the plot of the story. A good editing and this probably would really enhance the story.
Cette critique a été rédigée pour LibraryThing Member Giveaways.
This short novella is much better in the plot aspect than the previous short collections by R.J. Cnote (also known as Richard Porter). The problem that is still there and brings the story down is the lack of revision in his stories. Edit, edit, edit!
While the story is decent and at times intriguing, the poor grammar and punctuation makes it almost unreadable.
While the story is decent and at times intriguing, the poor grammar and punctuation makes it almost unreadable.
This was my dream as in sport of baseball. Three strikes and you're out. I had received two newspapers. Hopefully this third future newspaper I'll hit a home run with.
that morning I left for work. Kiss my lovely wife goodbye, got to work drank a coffee with the manager we spoke how the day would go and that I divide the tips properly with the rest of the workers. And that he could see me as the manager eventually.
Paper Money
I thanked him check the carwash vacuums are power our water supply. To make sure everything was intact. We were ready for business. We had several towels washed and dried in our washer and dryer was serviceable.
Opened the back door to the carwash and push the electric door button to open the front door. We were now open for business, the cars came, and we serviced them. The day went through nicely.
I sat with the manager counted all of our receipts looked at the bills calculated them and he made the deposit of the money to the bank. I left but just before I got on the bus there was that little boy.… (plus d'informations)
that morning I left for work. Kiss my lovely wife goodbye, got to work drank a coffee with the manager we spoke how the day would go and that I divide the tips properly with the rest of the workers. And that he could see me as the manager eventually.
Paper Money
I thanked him check the carwash vacuums are power our water supply. To make sure everything was intact. We were ready for business. We had several towels washed and dried in our washer and dryer was serviceable.
Opened the back door to the carwash and push the electric door button to open the front door. We were now open for business, the cars came, and we serviced them. The day went through nicely.
I sat with the manager counted all of our receipts looked at the bills calculated them and he made the deposit of the money to the bank. I left but just before I got on the bus there was that little boy.… (plus d'informations)
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