Jennivie WirriesCritiques

What a hot mess. Clunky writing. Six or seven sex scenes crammed into a 29 page story (that's a sex scene within every four pages!). Maybe if there were less sex scenes and more characterization and plot development I could have liked it. As it was, it had neither (only half-assed attempts).

As one of the group who worked on editing and proofing these stories and helped put the anthologies together I might be considered biased, but these anthologies are definitely worthy of the 5 star rating.