Raymond L. Weil
Auteur de Moon Wreck
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Œuvres de Raymond L. Weil
Stars & Empire 2: 10 More Galactic Tales 13 exemplaires
The Alliance (The Galactic Empire Wars, #4) — Auteur — 8 exemplaires
Stars & Empire 7 exemplaires
Empires at War (Earth Fall, #3) 2 exemplaires
Fleet Academy, Moon Wreck 4: The Slaver Wars, Book 3 1 exemplaire
Star One 1 exemplaire
Galactic Empire Wars 1 exemplaire
The Fall of the Confederation 1 exemplaire
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- male
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Bad
Every sentence is declarative. Statements are stacked to create paragraphs. Info dumps with measurements of aliens using human terms before humans appear in the book are foolish.
Corporals are never jumped in rank straight to Captain.
Wait, a nuclear device detonated 1500 meters above an ocean and there were survivors?!?
Admittedly, this is all in the first two chapters, but it doesn’t give me hope for the rest of the book. Even the dialogue is stiff, with explanations being given for everything, even the obvious motivations.… (plus d'informations)
Every sentence is declarative. Statements are stacked to create paragraphs. Info dumps with measurements of aliens using human terms before humans appear in the book are foolish.
Corporals are never jumped in rank straight to Captain.
Wait, a nuclear device detonated 1500 meters above an ocean and there were survivors?!?
Admittedly, this is all in the first two chapters, but it doesn’t give me hope for the rest of the book. Even the dialogue is stiff, with explanations being given for everything, even the obvious motivations.… (plus d'informations)
Bad
Every sentence is declarative. Statements are stacked to create paragraphs. Info dumps with measurements of aliens using human terms before humans appear in the book are foolish.
Corporals are never jumped in rank straight to Captain.
Wait, a nuclear device detonated 1500 meters above an ocean and there were survivors?!?
Admittedly, this is all in the first two chapters, but it doesn’t give me hope for the rest of the book. Even the dialogue is stiff, with explanations being given for everything, even the obvious motivations.… (plus d'informations)
Every sentence is declarative. Statements are stacked to create paragraphs. Info dumps with measurements of aliens using human terms before humans appear in the book are foolish.
Corporals are never jumped in rank straight to Captain.
Wait, a nuclear device detonated 1500 meters above an ocean and there were survivors?!?
Admittedly, this is all in the first two chapters, but it doesn’t give me hope for the rest of the book. Even the dialogue is stiff, with explanations being given for everything, even the obvious motivations.… (plus d'informations)
the underlying structure looks great, but after completing two chapters, I have only the slightest desire to discover what happens next - sadly I don't really care what happens to the characters I have been introduced to so far - well at least not enough to continue reading
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- Œuvres
- 57
- Aussi par
- 1
- Membres
- 852
- Popularité
- #30,032
- Évaluation
- 3.5
- Critiques
- 15
- ISBN
- 37
- Langues
- 1
- Favoris
- 1
Sorry just too much of the same plain vanilla space war where the authors don’t even bother to develop alien species. I think the m more of the multiple genre stories that get my attention.