Jeannie Watt
Auteur de The Christmas Secret
Séries
Œuvres de Jeannie Watt
The Cowboy's Christmas 6 exemplaires
Her Cowboy Baby Daddy (Return to Keller Ranch Book 2) 2 exemplaires
Her Cowboy Christmas Hero 2 exemplaires
A Sweet Montana Christmas: A Clean and Uplifting Romance (The Cowgirls of Larkspur Valley Book 2) (2023) 2 exemplaires
Montana Country Legacy: Big Sky Dreams: Made for the Rancher / Her Cowboy Boss / Her Montana Cowboy (2022) — Auteur — 2 exemplaires
Cowboy Meets Cowgirl (Return to Keller Ranch Book 3) 1 exemplaire
Jeannie Watt — Auteur — 1 exemplaire
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Statistiques
- Œuvres
- 60
- Membres
- 467
- Popularité
- #52,672
- Évaluation
- 3.8
- Critiques
- 25
- ISBN
- 146
- Langues
- 1
The second dislike is, despite being shorter, there is too much repetition. Of eye color. Of the past hurts. Of the wedding date. Of the dad-son conflict. More. Any good editor will notice these, and any good writer will work to edit them out. Readers aren't stupid, and the shorter the work, the less we rely on memory anyway. It was feeling like filler to meet a word count. Insulting.
The third dislike nearly made me stop reading. (Now I know I wouldn't have missed much. At the time it looked like I had a lot of story left...) The one sex scene is minimal - they go from distant to sex in a very short time, not terrible since they'd known each other before. But then after-sex is waaay too casual for the amount of angst still to be resolved. It felt like the scene was lifted whole from something else and not transitioned very well.
I won't read this author again.
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