Maria Wain-Vincent

This is a story I truly wanted to rate five stars. Because the story is pure Femdom, full of cruelty, and it contains really good Femdom scenes, along with the main character's absolutely correct psychological reaction for being an evil. But the author did a big mistake in choosing to write the story parts in back and forth chronology. The style of writing is actually not a mistake. On the contrary, this style was working a great buildup. Problem was, while trying to do this, the author made a big mess of getting confused herself of what happened when, because several of the passages were in contradictions with the others. Furthermore, the most crucial scenes and thorough details of the earlier day's of husband's subjugation was completely omitted, which was somewhat a requisite for this story. And for this reason I cannot rate it higher than three-stars. Nevertheless, it's a very good Femdom story, and I will highly recommend this to Femdom readers. This author surely has a great potential of writing some Femdom masterpieces.… (plus d'informations)

This is a story I truly wanted to rate five stars. Because the story is pure Femdom, full of cruelty, and it contains really good Femdom scenes, along with the main character's absolutely correct psychological reaction for being an evil. But the author did a big mistake in choosing to write the story parts in back and forth chronology. The style of writing is actually not a mistake. On the contrary, this style was working a great buildup. Problem was, while trying to do this, the author made a big mess of getting confused herself of what happened when, because several of the passages were in contradictions with the others. Furthermore, the most crucial scenes and thorough details of the earlier day's of husband's subjugation was completely omitted, which was somewhat a requisite for this story. And for this reason I cannot rate it higher than three-stars. Nevertheless, it's a very good Femdom story, and I will highly recommend this to Femdom readers. This author surely has a great potential of writing some Femdom masterpieces.… (plus d'informations)

This is a story I truly wanted to rate five stars. Because the story is pure Femdom, full of cruelty, and it contains really good Femdom scenes, along with the main character's absolutely correct psychological reaction for being an evil. But the author did a big mistake in choosing to write the story parts in back and forth chronology. The style of writing is actually not a mistake. On the contrary, this style was working a great buildup. Problem was, while trying to do this, the author made a big mess of getting confused herself of what happened when, because several of the passages were in contradictions with the others. Furthermore, the most crucial scenes and thorough details of the earlier day's of husband's subjugation was completely omitted, which was somewhat a requisite for this story. And for this reason I cannot rate it higher than three-stars. Nevertheless, it's a very good Femdom story, and I will highly recommend this to Femdom readers. This author surely has a great potential of writing some Femdom masterpieces.… (plus d'informations)

It's a non-consensual femdom erotica. For the three-quarters, the story is written so well that I intended to give it four or five starts. There was good buildup and characterization and there were some good scenes appropriate for such story. Pacing was also good. But then things started moving down - rushing and skipping and skimming several important story aspects, and then the story ended with a poor climax. Hence, last quarter is really disappointing, but before that the story has been fun reading.… (plus d'informations)