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Amber Nicole

Auteur de The Book of Azrael

19+ oeuvres 291 utilisateurs 11 critiques

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This one had quite a promising first half. But starting roughly 65% in it starts to deteriorate. It turns into an endless string of cheesy melodrama. The biggest problem is that the author is not able to find good reasons for the drama she wants so she keeps doing the same thing over and over again and that is the bad guys trapping or kidnapping people they shouldn't be able to. It's quite ridiculous because it doesn't happen once or twice. It happens almost a dozen times at the point where I dropped it. Over and over again things happen like her sister getting kidnapped or a literal god able to build and destroy entire worlds getting caught in some stupid magic trap just to name a few examples. Interspersed here and there are the classic stupid misunderstandings that lead to mountains of angst. This was quite cute at first but after you pulled the exact same thing 5 times it loses any and all credibility. The last 30% are just these two cycles. Absolute bullshit reason for something to go wrong and then 50 pages of melodrama around the thing that went wrong. Rinse and repeat.
I think if you just removed all these repeating sequences the book would be at least 30% shorter.
Am I saying the book is too long? Not really. It doesn't feel like the author deliberately has drawn out the story. I have the impression she just genuinely didn't notice the endless repetition and ridiculous cheesiness.
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omission | 1 autre critique | Oct 19, 2023 |
Oh my God I can't stop crying. I don't want to lose him. I don't want her to lose any of them. And I'm betting her boobs are bigger because she's knocked up. That's just my guess. Oh my God I can't wait to read the next book. Oh my god. That seems to be the only thing I can say.
 
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Morgie99 | Jul 7, 2023 |
Omg! Whoever did not like this series should have their heads examined. I cried so much that my pillow took damage. This book Was so emotional, scary so good. I actually told the author I didn't want to finish the book because I was so worried about what was coming in a later chapter... But let me tell you, don't skip to the chapter to see, make sure to read the entire book, both books, to totally understand. This series was amazing. And I'm still over here crying. It was so good. I'm like at a loss for words. I don't know what else to say to get you to read this book. But make sure you check out this duet it's amazing. OMG I don't know what else to say.… (plus d'informations)
 
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Morgie99 | Jul 7, 2023 |
I gave this book five stars even though I was a little disappointed by the grammar. There were a few parts were there was need of a period or something to that effect and I was just a little hung up on that but the story is solid. There's a lot going on. And it was sad. Can't wait for the next book.
 
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