Nathan J. Morissey

Read Like Bad Fanfic

I'm not one to cut down a writer's hard work, but this reads like the first draft of a badly written fan fiction. The story is convoluted it's not paced well, the writing veers from overdone to childish. But worse than all that, the writer seems to be a closet homophobe. Julien is written as a gay man who fits every negative stereotype and clearly has no self control as he was fondling an unconscious, injured man.

I couldn't even make it to the end. I wish I could say something good about this, because I hate being negative about anyone's writing. I now how hard it it so create something and to have the courage to publish it. But not even the idea was good. I have honestly read much better Teen Wolf fanfic.… (plus d'informations)

I can say with all honestly to the best of my memory this is the absolute worst thing I've ever read. No proofreader and if that wasn't bad enough sweet Jesus this is god-motherfuckin-awful. BUT, if you want a synopsis.

Gay boy meets his gay daddy who is a gay lover who fucks like a gentle gay lover who hits his gay g-spot and refuses to marry (for homosexual reasons) who likes gay diners and wants to be a gay Prince and his brother who is abslutely not gay (he likes fast cars, luxurious condos, and fucking really hot girls) will disappoint his country and peoples. Some freshly-fired bullets (from the bullets that just went through the window in case we didn't know they were just shot) appear in the story like MAGIC and then the story takes an acid trip and makes even less sense. It's epic bad.

But, hey, it's free and 26 pages. So, you should totally read it.… (plus d'informations)