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Portia Moore
Auteur de If I Break
Séries
Œuvres de Portia Moore
Freed (A Dark New Adult Romance) 2 exemplaires
Found (Freed Book 2) 1 exemplaire
Before Him (If I Break) 1 exemplaire
Captured: Claimed Book 3 (Freed) 1 exemplaire
The Complete Freed Series 1 exemplaire
Étiqueté
Partage des connaissances
- Sexe
- female
- Nationalité
- USA
- Lieu de naissance
- Chicago, Illinois, USA
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Statistiques
- Œuvres
- 20
- Membres
- 277
- Popularité
- #83,813
- Évaluation
- 4.0
- Critiques
- 14
- ISBN
- 23
But this book required a bit more polishing. There were issues with repetition, grammar, spelling, flow, structure that made the story halt and hiccup, drawing me out of the reading. I would have liked to see, for example, more counter/supporting plot - maybe perspective of what is going on with the main character through other characters' eyes. I would have liked to see a more creative way back story was filled in, although the book itself does a decent job of flashback and present switches and develops a rhythm that is easy enough to follow. What I would have loved to see was more of the main character's personality without men in her life. How she does without being 'co-dependent'. It seems her life is very much focused on waiting for her prince to come and nothing else. There is a depth in characters that isn't well portrayed at this point, just touched on.
Regardless, I think it is a very interesting book.
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