Katy Manz
Auteur de Midnight in The Renaissance Elevator: A Charity Anthology
Œuvres de Katy Manz
Midnight in The Renaissance Elevator: A Charity Anthology — Contributeur — 2 exemplaires
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For a story that started with a family clan under a three-pronged attack and things exploding, it quickly became a non-issue.
Even the characterization is too over-the-top sweet. Someone is thrown out of their family and just drops everything, and it is all good? The father who threw his son out is described as a “good man”? A “good ma.n” does not throw his son out of the family because of a career choice - a stupid one - a selfish one - a controlling one - a cruel one does, but not a good one.
The plot has potential but it is never developed. Everything falls smoothly into place, and any conflict is quickly over. I have to admit that about 1/3 of the way through I started skim reading… (plus d'informations)