Roni Loren
Auteur de The Ones Who Got Away
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Œuvres de Roni Loren
The Bad Boys of Eden 4 exemplaires
Prazer à Hora Fora de Horas - Livro 2 1 exemplaire
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- Sexe
- female
- Nationalité
- USA
- Lieu de naissance
- New Orleans, Louisiana, USA
- Lieux de résidence
- New Orleans, Louisiana, USA
Dallas, Texas, USA
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- Œuvres
- 42
- Aussi par
- 2
- Membres
- 1,773
- Popularité
- #14,522
- Évaluation
- 3.9
- Critiques
- 125
- ISBN
- 113
- Langues
- 3
- Favoris
- 1
There were some issues. Once everyone was in love, the kink largely disappeared. Truthfully the kink was pretty tame to start. It matters because we are told that this is a primal drive for Auden, and that drive causes shame, but if that is so why does it largely disappear? Nothing wrong with dabbling and switching it up, that is all fun, but the story tells you it is more than that for him (maybe the others too, they certainly enjoy it, but Auden is billed as a dyed-in-the-wool dominant.) The other issue is that the story is really good, but the writing is not. It is not terrible, but also not as good as I wanted it to be. I am not looking for literary merit, but the clunky sentences weighed down the storytelling and as a result, exciting things were less exciting, romantic things were less romantic, sexy things were less sexy, etc.
This is a 3.5. There is a lot to love here and I expect to return to this writer.… (plus d'informations)