Elizabeth Knight (5)

If you read my reviews then you know that two-star review from me is kind of scary. The problem is I am at odds with this book. The formatting is atrocious. I am used to reading books with clear paragraph breaks. This book had none of that. And I've looked at some of her other books and they are the exact same. So formatting has to go. This one constant large ongoing paragraph is not only annoying but migraine inducing.

And then we come to the CUM VS COME issue.
And for all those out there who are going to jump to her defense about the language barriers or that maybe she doesn't have the same education and blah blah blah blah. Don't bother. She uses the terms correctly throughout her entire book however there are places where she skipped over it and used the wrong term. So she knew what she was doing. She knew the proper words to use. She just got lazy and skipped over them. So I find that disrespectful not only to herself but to her readers. And I can't even blame a proofreader on that because she used the correct terms several times throughout her book but then use the incorrect terms practically right afterwards. I'm not going to educate you on the proper terms because I've done it several times in many of my reviews and if you want to look up my reviews go ahead because it gets really boring having to have the same discussion over and over and over.

To be fair I did like the base story. Which is why I gave it to stars. As a foster kid, as well as a child abuse survivor, I do understand the pain that Cambi was going through. So I recognize the behaviors and I could agree with a lot of the behaviors because I've gone through them. So when I read other people's reviews about how she's childlike etc etc then yes I do see their point but I do agree with the author on how she wrote out the characters identity.

I also liked the alphas. I found them to be very on roll. Or on point?

The character savo I'm really holding out hope that he's a good guy. And that he does the right thing. I guess I'm going to find out in the next book right?

I didn't like the fact that she seemed like a whiny little child. I mean it's okay to have emotion and cry and feel vulnerable but at some point get a backbone. It seems like a few times that she did have one but then she'd have a meltdown right afterwards. That's not a heroine that is a victim.

And this government stuff, the government official. Obviously his hero father right? That's not a spoil alert that's just me you know musing.

But for those people out there that get all wiggy I will mark it as a spoiler alert how's that?

See what I mean by I'm at odds over this book? Part of me likes it, it calls to the little girl in me that suffered but the other part of me, the stronger side, survivor, thinks that was just too much to be questioned about this book. Too much unenjoyable things going on, especially the paragraph issue, made it less enjoyable for me. Does any of this make sense?

Anyway, I'm hoping that I will like this next book I am going to give it another try. Cuz I want to find out what happens to cambi.

To be totally honest with you I don't know if I would suggest this book to any of my friends. I will wait till the end of the next book to give my opinion.… (plus d'informations)

Against this story three stars because there were a multitude of mistakes and grammar errors that drove me absolutely insane throughout the entire book. However the story was solid enough that I actually want to read the next book so, I guess that means I would recommend it to a friend. It is extremely slow burn. I don't know who said it was a medium burn but they were wrong.

It has fast pace actions so I would recommend this to one of my male friends at least but if you are looking for smut value, this one is extremely slow.

And there is the CUM VS COME fight as well.

Let's see what happens next.… (plus d'informations)