R. Gayle Hawkins

It took awhile to get into this book. The storyline is great but the book was a bit stilted. I got used to the flow of the book as I continued reading. There are a lot of corrections that need taken care of so I hope it’s proofread.

Interesting story concept! I found the style of writing a bit stilted especially the characters speech patterns. I would have liked to see more character development. I felt like the end was anti- climactic. A quick read that required little thought!
I agree with the premise that you are who you are regardless where you live!
Definitely needs more proof reading for errors!!

I love the cover art and title, so I thought I'd really enjoy this. There are good elements, but I stopped reading due to errors. The present tense kind of threw me off too. It's ok, but didn't feel all that connected to Bella.

While I did get caught up in the story the book read like a science fiction for younger readers. It seemed like the book still needed to be proofed as there were numerous errors. It also didn't seem like something a Christian publisher would handle. The last few chapters seemed almost to have been rushed to an anticlimactic finish.