O. M. Grey
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The only time I can think of where switching tense within a book works is if your character is having a flashback, dream or vision of some kind, in which case the text should be separated from the rest and italicized. There are authors who do this very well, but I think it is a more advanced technique best not attempted by people who can't even manage proper grammar. (Ex. "Still, it wasn't so loud that they wouldn't hear a scream...No. Must continue to move slowly." There seems to be a pronoun missing there.)
Additionally, I don't need period dialogue, but I hate a period piece where the characters sound like they belong in a modern high school instead of a 19th century ball room.… (plus d'informations)