Elixa Everett

Hmmm.. well this was a very quick read indeed. I suppose that the premise that the main action was compressed into a single week had some bearing on it. It was enjoyable for certain but I'm not sure it's something I'll be revisiting.

Personally I found the ending had a touch of a 'let's finish this off quickly' feel. Maybe I just wanted a bit more drama. I definitely felt it needed another page or so of expansion to make it feel right.