Jaliza A. Burwell
Auteur de Magic and Mayhem: A Collection of 21 Fantasy Novels
Séries
Œuvres de Jaliza A. Burwell
Holidays Between the Sheets A Reverse Harem Anthology of Festive Scenes that Get to the Point (2018) — Auteur — 3 exemplaires
Biomystic Security (5 Book Series) 1 exemplaire
All the Discord (Needing Harmony Book 1) 1 exemplaire
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Statistiques
- Œuvres
- 17
- Membres
- 83
- Popularité
- #218,811
- Évaluation
- 3.3
- Critiques
- 3
- ISBN
- 17
MarySue main character who is either badly written or has ADD crossed with multiple personality disorder. She cycles through emotionally states faster than a two year old hopped up on pixie stix.
Proofreading is needed. Some sentences are missing words, some words are missing letters.
Characters are defined by their descriptions and not by their actions, unless their actions are dramatic and overblown.
Oh look, a werewolf. And over here we have a vampire. Next up, a ‘black dog’, a golem, an elf, a dragon, and a witch.
She works at a security company, is a foster child, lives in a two floor penthouse she bought herself, is a genius, and has required healing twice in the first third of the book. But she is not part of a security team and the first injury was because she was trying to stop a mugger.
This is a mess masquerading as a book.… (plus d'informations)