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Edie Bryant

Auteur de Changing Leaves

12 oeuvres 27 utilisateurs 3 critiques

Œuvres de Edie Bryant

Changing Leaves (2017) 6 exemplaires
Broken Record (2017) 5 exemplaires
Pumpkin Patch (2017) 3 exemplaires
Thankful (2017) 3 exemplaires
The Trip (2017) 2 exemplaires
Gifted (2017) 2 exemplaires
Blossom (2017) 1 exemplaire
Cabin Fever (2018) 1 exemplaire
Two Lovers (2017) 1 exemplaire
Love Me Not (2017) 1 exemplaire
Steep Slope (2017) 1 exemplaire

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I really like the premise and the execution of some early scenes. The scenes where Gina really lays it all out to Jess about how shitty she was to her was great. Leading up to that scene I was worried that there would be immediate forgiveness. It was a good scene because Gina wasn't kind about any of it. Having been in her shoes before(I had someone I loved cut me out before. The person never came back though) I found the outrage very realistic.

What I don't find realistic or at all believable is the rest of the story. Maybe I'm just extremely cynical but I don't see anyone recovering from that. It would be different if jess' reasoning was different or if Jess hadn't responded to Ginas feelings at the time. As is it, it felt like the kind of thing no relationship could come back from. The amount of time is also very relevant, 10 years with no contact is way too long for any of Jess' excuses to make sense.

Even beyond that, even if I could buy into them going out again, they didn't build up to it. An out of place sex scene is what starts it up again, when everything prior to that was pretty slow, suddenly the pacing kicks into overdrive. Then its time skip after time skip before the end and none of it feels believable because none of the foundation has been laid out. Again, even if I buy that they could potentially fix their relationship(which I don't) its still an issue that they rush the second half of the story.

The premise is interesting enough that I want to see someone else do it better. But man I did love that scene where Gina rips her a new one about running away
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Jackkun | Apr 5, 2021 |
This one took me forever because I nearly DNF’d it. Someone’s underedited first book, perhaps? I liked the author’s other one that I read two days ago just fine, like 3.5 ish, but whew this one. Anyway, on to others.
 
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SuziSteffen | Feb 20, 2018 |
A very acceptable LA-based 3.5 f/f romance. Another grandmother understands her granddaughter more than anyone else does (is this trope in the lesbian romance writing guide or??).
 
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SuziSteffen | Feb 20, 2018 |

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Œuvres
12
Membres
27
Popularité
#483,027
Évaluation
½ 2.5
Critiques
3
ISBN
5