There is a reasonable story buried within these pages, however as it currently stands this book is quite poorly edited and suffers from several rudimentary writing faux pas, including:

- Having one character tell another character something they both already know for the benefit of transferring the knowledge to the reader
- Over use of cliches
- Use of corny dialogue

Some parts which would be good are short or skimmed over, and other parts which are inconsequential are covered in detail, which led to a rather short length of 103 pages where it abruptly ends the plot & subplots abruptly with 'to be continued' and no resolution.

At least there wasn't spelling mistakes. ( )