I keep trying to start this because the premise is sooo up my alley, but it's hard because it is in need of some serious edits. Punctuation is missing all over the place, and all the writing is conversational, like how a person chit-chats, rather than true narration. Needs a lot of polishing to be honest.

I keep trying to start this because the premise is sooo up my alley, but it's hard because it is in need of some serious edits. Punctuation is missing all over the place, and all the writing is conversational, like how a person chit-chats, rather than true narration. Needs a lot of polishing to be honest.

Synopsis:

Caleb McNamara took one look at the golden hair beauty and fell like a ton of bricks. As a captain in the army he knew how to live hard and play harder. He’s never found a woman who could keep him locked down for long, but something tells him he might’ve met his match.

Melissa Jackson knew she wasn’t society’s picture of sexy beauty. She saw her healthy size as a detriment; at least that’s what she’d always told herself. So how was she to believe that the movie star gorgeous captain with the amazing tattooed body was really interested in her? It had to be some joke between him and his army buddies. She soon learns differently when Caleb pulls out all the stops to win her heart.

My review:

I know for a fact that many people will find Jordan Silver's books objectionable. I love them. I love her gruff uber alpha male men and the women they fall for. The language is always strong and the scenes are sometimes risque, but that is what makes the story so appealing.

So be warned strong language as well as strong men. But well worth the read ( )