I had a hard time getting into the premise of the book and getting caught up in the story. It seemed like I couldn't connect with Julie/Emma or Zach (the two main characters) to care what happened to them. It wasn't until Julie/Emma was threatened in Zack's home that I felt I'd connected to her character enough to care what happened to her. The plot trick of having each doubt what the other felt about him/her feels old and overused.

While Zach reaching out to his contacts seems believable, the fact that one of them finds someone with the exact information that Zach needs just at the time he needs it to rescue Julie/Emma is a bit deus ex machina.

For Kay to be such a major part of the story and then not have any resolution to that part seemed a bit of a letdown.

I was glad to see that the two got together in the end. ( )