The proposal at the end seemed a little sudden, but otherwise a great story. ( )

The proposal at the end seemed a little sudden, but otherwise a great story. ( )

Sweet and cute! ( )

The premise was good, but I felt that it lacked realism. Issues were resolved to quickly. 2.5 stars. ( )

Two stars for the story, added another for the donation of time and effort by the author. It had definite potential, but I hate the evil woman trying to turn the gay man straight trope, and how she went about it was horrible. I also felt it was a bit rushed, but it was a good try for a first time author. I did like both characters, and the writing itself was pretty solid, the author just needs to work on slowing things down, and not villainizing the women. ( )