How do I begin? This was poorly written. First of all the use of English was substandard. I'm sorry but many many words were used incorrectly. It was like the author just put down the first thing she thought of regardless of whether or not the sentence was constructed correctly or if the word was used correctly or even if the correct word was used. It desperately needed to be edited by someone who could point out that this

"...she moaned, loudly, uncontrolled and unexpecting of how that was going to feel."

is not a properly constructed sentence. That sort of thing is what an edit and rewrite is for. This is only one example.

The book consisted mostly of dialog. There was little to no description or any attempt to set any sort of scene. There was NO sci fi world building. As a minor example of this how can an alien be named Graham Masterson? This is an alien whose people had only had one minor contact with Earth about a hundred years ago. Shouldn't he have been called something like T'Car Sharil? The story jumped around sort of like a 4th grader saying "and then this happened and then this happened and then this happened." The characters were cardboard. The sex scenes were uninteresting. The interactions between all the characters were unbelievable.

Gosh I hate to pan a book like I'm doing here but it just wasn't good. I'd like to tell this author to try again, get an editor or even a friend with an English degree to read it first and then rewrite until it's polished. ( )

Well this books has a bit of everything lizard-like space aliens, humanoid aliens, captured earthlings, spankings, dominate males to name a few. Oh, my. Not usually my first pick of sub-genre but wow I really loved this story. Ellie is so smart and so gutsy. She's really keeping Graham on his toes. Can't wait to read more of this story. ( )