3.25 good enougj to read nxt one ( )

November 26, 2014 – Finished Reading

October 27, 2014 amz

The Merzetti Effect
3 Stars

Delano Bowen, a physician and a centuries old vampire, has dedicated his life to the search for a vaccine for vampirism. His research focuses on a genetic mutation found only in the Merzetti family, whose blood is capable of reversing the vampire virus. Ainsley Crawford, a nurse and the last known Merzetti, is lured into assisting Delano with his work, but soon becomes the target of his enemies who are determined to prevent the development of the cure.

The basic plot premise has potential, unfortunately, the writing is clinical and the medical jargon is excessive. This results in a book that reads more like an article in a medical journal. The romance lacks originality and is quite similar to Lynsay Sands’ How to Marry a Millionaire Vampire sans the humor.

The characters are well-developed although Delano’s (not a fan of that name) whole “the ends justify the means” spiel is just an excuse for lying to the heroine about everything! Moreover, the fact that he is so casual and blasé about foisting the woman he is attracted to onto his bodyguard detracts from his hero status.

Ainsley is a spirited and likable heroine, however, her naïveté and liberal outlook on life means she is far too trusting and even a little gullible.

The villain is a real nasty piece of work, but there is virtually no detail on his background or relationship with Delano and the tension in this subplot feels forced.

All in all, a solid first book that works despite its problems. ( )

Very engaging vampire story. Kept my interest from the start and the story line was different enough from typical vampire books. ( )

Vampire premise was unique, but the writing, plot and character development were all unimpressive. Some steamy scenes and a bit of a thriller, but by the end, I just wanted to be done with the book. Can't recommend it. ( )