Well written novella. Would have been a lot better if it had been longer! ( )

I'm not really sure what I just read. There were a lot of questions left unanswered and not enough information to lead you to your own conclusions. I believe this could have been a really great read if it would have been developed more thoroughly. As for the general plot, it is a very sweet, and sad, story. It makes you feel for the narrator a sort of joy as well as a bit of sympathy. The idea was definately there but fell a bit short of what it could, or should, have been. ( )

I'm not really sure what I just read. There were a lot of questions left unanswered and not enough information to lead you to your own conclusions. I believe this could have been a really great read if it would have been developed more thoroughly. As for the general plot, it is a very sweet, and sad, story. It makes you feel for the narrator a sort of joy as well as a bit of sympathy. The idea was definately there but fell a bit short of what it could, or should, have been. ( )