poorly written and/or edited, couldn't finish ( )

This book had a weak story line. I like other BDSM books, but this one did not have a story to keep my interest. I'm guessing that most people won't buy this for that reason, but it's helpful. ( )

Kindle freebee. Badly written, incoherent characters, not very interesting plot. Cliché and obvious.

Jane is a sub, and she switches from hinting at being very experienced in the modality to being completely timid. She goes to a party, that somehow her work organized but she knows nothing about and has nothing to do there but enjoy - that was one of the plot irritations for me - why even add in that complication if you aren't going to pay any attention to it? Anyways, she goes to a party, to host the birthday of some billionaire, and of course, the billionaire gloms on to her and wants her, but she doesn't want a relationship, oh no, she's only prepared to commit to a day, and then a weekend, and then, o my goodness, who could have predicted... well we can't predict because we are only shown the first night, you have to pay to get the rest of this riveting tale, except that there is so much better stuff out there.. my recommendation - don't bother paying find something by Cherise Sinclair for some really good BDSM stuff (Master of the Mountain is one of my favs) ( )

Quick read, not much of a story, but I assume people aren't reading this for the engrossing storyline. Definitely not my type of book, but it was a free Kindle download. ( )

Free

67 pgs ( )