Didn't finish for various reasons. 1. The main characters were 9 (at the beginning) and the voice/vocab was way too old for the average 9-year-old. Also the tenses were off. 2. I'm too busy, at the moment, to read another story about reigion being evil or someone who is "ugly like me." I don't necessarily want Twilight either... I guess I'm just hard to please. Perhaps I will return to it but I'm just over- supplied with more interesting things right now. ( )