Despite not being the most well written series of books, I've enjoyed the read until this book. This book was exceptionally sloppy written with little attention to the overall story and time line, where it seems that the author didn't remember what information had been given in earlier books. Deviations from earlier books, that couldn't be explained with that someone told Heaven another lie became just annoying - even if sometimes it was regarding very small details. E.g. wondering if the policeman that helped her in the previous book was still on the force, when she was gone about 1 week...how the recently cut bangs grew from very short to being in the eyes in little more than 1 week.

The other books in the series suffered sometimes of this as well, but not as bad as this book. Reading the article in WSJ (http://online.wsj.com/article/SB122004548754784425.html#articleTabs%3Darticle), this is not so surprising but still disappointing. Equally disappointing was the ending of this book, which was built up as if there would be 1-2 more books to come. ( )

What an abrupt ending to an otherwise engaging series! OK so it wasn't the best written series I've ever read but it did hold my attention and make me wonder what would happen next. But I wanted the ending more wrapped up than it was.

Hiro's fate in this book shocked me.