Ugh. Yeah. Lots of grammar issue. I thought most off the stories are boring and dumb. But they can be saved.... Just edit more and add more details on them. Could be a nice read.... ( )

The book of short stories had a lot of potential but blew it.
it was obviously written for a younger audience but sadly I would not recommend it for them with it in its present state. I always (well almost always) find books educational whether they be fact or fiction; there is always something I can take away for myself.
This book requires a lot of editing before it hits the bookshelves so that it can be both entertaining and educational. ( )

It's a sweet attempt to have nice children's stories but the early reviewer's copy needs to be cleaned up for spelling and grammar quite a bit. It was painful reading through the short 28 page pdf early reviewer's version. ( )

The stories were positive tales featuring mostly the adventures of children and animals. It is because of this positivity that I rated these in the mid range.

The audience would likely be young children, however, there were grammar and spelling mistakes which makes me hesitate recommending them for children. Children need to see properly formatted sentences. For example, "his" is often spelled "he's" and "being" as "been".

The last story appears to be about the author, however, I think it would be appropriate to have an author biography somewhere. ( )

I’m going to be honest, and say this book was certainly not one of my favorites. The short stories element is always cool to see an authors range, their strength at world development — this book was not that. It reads like chatGPT wrote it. Some of the stories make no sense at all. Is this author much more comfortable in another language, and that’s why it didn’t translate well?
I just really don’t really have anything positive to say about anything that makes you question if the author is either a computer, an ESOL speaker, or a head trauma victim. I don’t really know what to say to this book. ( )