It took awhile to get into this book. The storyline is great but the book was a bit stilted. I got used to the flow of the book as I continued reading. There are a lot of corrections that need taken care of so I hope it’s proofread. ( )

Interesting story concept! I found the style of writing a bit stilted especially the characters speech patterns. I would have liked to see more character development. I felt like the end was anti- climactic. A quick read that required little thought!
I agree with the premise that you are who you are regardless where you live!
Definitely needs more proof reading for errors!! ( )

I love the cover art and title, so I thought I'd really enjoy this. There are good elements, but I stopped reading due to errors. The present tense kind of threw me off too. It's ok, but didn't feel all that connected to Bella. ( )

While I did get caught up in the story the book read like a science fiction for younger readers. It seemed like the book still needed to be proofed as there were numerous errors. It also didn't seem like something a Christian publisher would handle. The last few chapters seemed almost to have been rushed to an anticlimactic finish. ( )

I was really intrigued by the storyline and couldn't put the book down! I got to about chapter 16 and started to notice some errors. Like the child said something but it was supposed to be the mother who said it. There were more errors like this through the rest of the book and other errors. I keep pushing through though because I did want to find out what happened. Without giving away the ending, I was a bit let down at the end and needed a few things tied up. Not a bad story line but could be developed more. I also thought it was Christian but there weren't any Christian themes in the book at all and there was a little bit of cursing that typically isn't in Christian books.