3.5 stars ( )

Two things about this book. First, yes, writing twincest has got to be difficult. But sweet bippity, it would be nice if someone in the novel was tangentially engaged in reality and had some objection to twins' first romantic and sexual relationship being with each other. Having everyone (friends, coaches, and the twins' mother) blithely accept the relationship really pulled me out of the story. And second, even sweeter bippity, this novel is badly in need of editing. The author thanked an editor in the front matter, but it seems like both the author and the editor were asleep at the wheel: mixed up homophones, missing words, using the wrong names for characters, etc. This was a good result for a casual effort, but the novel probably wasn't ready for publication. ( )

2.5 stars!
Ended with a HFN? No idea if the story will be continued. ( )