Mindi Winters

It had potential, but it really should have been properly edited and proofread before being published.

It had potential, but it really should have been properly edited and proofread before being published.

Austin's Lost Bride -- Different title..??

First off, this was entirely too confusing with the title thing for this book.

After I figured out what book it was I finally was able to sit down and read. It fell short it was entirely too short to tell the story that it was trying to tell. It fell short on character development and the full storyline fell short.

This book badly needed a good editor - it reads like a first draft dashed off to get all the concepts down, but without further clean-up. There was an interesting story in there, which gained it a second star from me, but it was painful to read (I found myself rewriting it in my head as I read, trying to fix grammar and phrasing).