Shiree McCarver

Reviewed by EmmaRae
ebook provided by Mocha Memoirs Press

This is another cute little novella, similar to the rest of the series. Shirou is a loveable character you'd want to meet yourself in real life. Zola I didn't like as much, but their chemistry is definitely there and well written. There are several things my analytical brain got caught up with regarding grammar, continuity, or possibility, but this is still worth a read if you have an hour or two you want to spice up with some sizzle. I am classifying it as strictly erotica, simply because the rest of the book didn't have support through comedy, drama, mystery or characterization. Read it waiting for a plane...that would be terrific. Go watch the video for Sammy Kershaw's “Meant to Be” on YouTube, then go read this book in the terminal and look around to see if there are any hot geeks nearby.… (plus d'informations)

This book had potential, but was so poorly copy-edited (loads of typos and grammatical errors on every page), that I could not get into the story because I kept having to figure out what the author was trying to say ("'immolate?' Oh, I bet she means 'imitate'...") and it became tedious. Some of the errors shouldn't have gotten past a basic spellcheck.

I feel bad saying this because the story DID have potential and there were good ideas in there. I just don't want to work that hard to figure out what the author is trying to say in what is mean to be escapist reading.… (plus d'informations)