David Logan (3)
Auteur de Mat, Mount and Frame It Yourself (Crafts Highlights)
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Œuvres de David Logan
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- male
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Statistiques
- Œuvres
- 2
- Membres
- 159
- Popularité
- #132,375
- Évaluation
- 3.3
- Critiques
- 7
- ISBN
- 27
- Langues
- 1
For the most part, I really enjoyed the way this book was written. As 5-year old Edward, the narration was spot-on, and the continued use of the word 'precocious' to describe him was also correct, but he was a likeable character and I enjoyed his company. The way the narration changed when Edward started in education was also well done. The character development was very good. The setting for the most part of the story, the Manse, was sinister and gothic, with creaky timbers and ghosts and bodies in the basement. I was unsure what time period was being depicted here though.
To begin with the story flowed really well, there were some intriguing events and situations - I loved the idea of the time-travelling Morris Minor, and was a bit disappointed that it didn't appear again until the end. Unfortunately, after the first part of the story there a few other things that also began to disappoint and led to a big let-down at the end.
The character of Alf was one such disappointment. I never really understood if he was imaginary or not, or for the most part, what he was doing there at all. He was a bit annoying to be honest. The last 2 sections of the book seemed to hint at a lot of involvement with Alf in the story, but he wasn't really that important to the story at all in the end. The main part of the story to me were the events at the Manse, with Sophia and their parents, and the other storyline just got in the way of that. In fact, the part where Alf began to explain to Edward about time travel and universes was so convoluted I almost stopped reading.
Towards the end of the story the consistency with the narration began to falter and I get the feeling that the author was trying too hard to keep it interesting - sections written in third-person, passages in present tense, dialogue in script format - at these points it became awkward and clunky and all it did was spoil the narration, which up until these points was very enjoyable and didn't need the interruption in flow.
As for the ending, this is where the book did fall flat. Dead bodies everywhere. It was as though the author wasn't sure on how to finish and answer all the questions that had been mounting up throughout the book, and this was the easy way out. I was left wondering what I had had actually just read.
I think that with more careful planning, this book could have been so much more. The book would have got four stars for the writing style, but the plot was where it failed in the end.… (plus d'informations)