Auryn Hadley
Auteur de The Kiss of Death
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Œuvres de Auryn Hadley
Wolf's Pack (Wolves Next Door, #3) 4 exemplaires
Magic in the Moonlight (Where the Wild Things Grow, #1) 4 exemplaires
Wolf's Pack (Wolves Next Door Book 3) 2 exemplaires
Gamer Girls: Books 4-7 2 exemplaires
Game Over (Gamer Girls, #7) 1 exemplaire
Spells In The Summertime: A Moonlight Universe Novel (Where The Wild Things Grow Book 2) 1 exemplaire
Ruin (A Flawed Series Book 1) 1 exemplaire
Not A Ghost (The Eidolon Chronicles #2) 1 exemplaire
The Path of Temptation: Books 4-6: Box Set 2 1 exemplaire
Virtual Reality (Gamer Girls, #3) 1 exemplaire
The Demons' Muse: Books 4-5 1 exemplaire
Gamer Girls - Books 4-7 1 exemplaire
Rise of the Iliri (11 Book Series) 1 exemplaire
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Just a very cheesy self-insert fiction with waaay to much tell and too little show.
From within the reverse harem uf fandom, this was probably pretty good though.
High 3 stars up to 4 stars compared to all the other stuff swirling around in this specific subgenre.
I am a bit sad that just because it's a somewhat specific taste, the expected standards on general writing are so much lower.
I am not willing to give up all my standards of what I expect good writing to be just for a little wish fulfilment like this but that is a taste thing I guess.
With this one, I am particularly annoyed because it wasn't all bad.
Even tho we have an incredible amount of unnecessary tell for things that we have already been shown plenty, other aspects I appreciate in world-building are seamlessly integrated.
There are very few absolutes and a lot of grey areas here.
It becomes clear pretty early on for example that there is no such thing as "the bad guys" based on general groups here and I like that especially because it is not pointed out in the usual in-your-face style. There is a lot of nuance like that that is never underlined which is rather unexpected because in most other books of that sort the world just serves as a stage for the romance and is spotty at best.
This one commits quite a few major crimes in the consistent magic department, among other places, I would usually complain about but it really didn't bother me that much especially because these flaws mainly showed up as minor plot conveniences in the midst of the action.
A surprising amount of thought went into a lot of the world-building and even the pseudo-science explanations require a thorough grip on the topics to be obvious as nonsense (which is really rare, sadly).
What annoyed me most is the general writing style of constantly pointing out nice behaviour in regards to relationships. It's more an acquired taste and intentional within the subgenre afaict but that doesn't excuse it. It's bad writing nonetheless.
Furthermore, telling the reader constantly what to think about the heroine without her actual behaviour not only not reinforcing these claims but contradicting them is really bad form as well.
There are a lot of these newbie writing mistakes you usually see in fanfictions.
Just to be clear, it is a lot easier to point these things out as a reader than actually doing better and I am not claiming I could do better.
That doesn't invalidate criticism that compares the quality with other books though.
Sorry for this rather rambling and unconnected mess. There you can see how good a writer I myself would be.… (plus d'informations)