Ursula Dukes

I did not finish this. I couldn't. Living with a grammar Nazi has assured me I am not one but this book...egads! Every other sentence started with a conjunction. The narrative was all over the place, jumping from one idea to another and then back again without feeling like it completed either thought. I really wanted to like this but instead, I kept having to reread sentences. I did more editing in my mind than I did seeing the story. I loved the idea of this but not the execution so much. Maybe some polishing would help?… (plus d'informations)