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Chargement... Sweet Topping (Cattle Valley, #3)
Information sur l'oeuvreSweet Topping par Carol Lynne
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Inscrivez-vous à LibraryThing pour découvrir si vous aimerez ce livre Actuellement, il n'y a pas de discussions au sujet de ce livre. This is a tough review to write. A good friend got me hooked on the Cattle Valley soap opera. This episode is Gill and Kyle's story. The story revolves around the town's bakery owner and token wheelie, Kyle, and former football star and now garage owner, Gill. Both men are likable and some of the town's other faces pop up to do their thing. I truly wanted to enjoy this romance story but as a man in a wheelchair myself, I was aggravated by the repeated errors that Ms Lynne made in Kyle's every day life. Her research on spinal cord injuries was severely lacking. Many of the things that Kyle did just did not jive with the things that he could not do. The ending of the story would have been wonderful but it is not physically possible on a neurological basis. I will not carry on a diatribe here because I believe that Ms Lynne meant well in her story. I only ask that any authors out there that are going to write about something complex like a spinal cord injury lifestyle, please have someone in that position beta read your book for accuracy. ( ) Sweet Topping is the third book in the ‘Cattle Valley’ series and starts during the Christmas party mentioned in the last book. It tells the story of Kyle Brynn, who uses a wheelchair, and Darshawn ‘Gill’ Gilling, an ex-football player and owner and operator of a garage and gas station. This is told in third person from Kyle’s and Gill’s pov. 2.5 Stars I read the first two books and looked forward to this one because of Kyle, but unfortunately, I was disappointed. The storyline was rushed and had an inconsistency that bothered me, which I’ll mention later. Everything about this story was too fast, from the way scenes were resolved to the way paragraphs rapidly segued to the next. Instead of flowing smoothly by expanding the scene and pulling the readers into the action, the author told the story and used too much monologue. I was unable to immerse myself in this book because of the distance set up by the author because of the writing style. If the author had taken her time and written longer scenes, making a longer book, then this story would have turned out much better. I did think that Kyle and Gill were a good fit as a couple. However, there is one scene that serves as a crucial break up scene that didn’t make sense at all and here’s why. Sweet Topping was disappointing because it was rushed, the scenes jumping from one idea to the next without flowing smoothly. There’s a lack of emotional depth and connection to the characters because the author told the story and used a lot of monologue. The only thing that was good was the characters fit well together. Too bad the author didn’t give us more details about these two. I give this 2.5 Stars and raise it to 3 Stars just because of the characters being right for each other. Sometimes when Carol Lynne decides to talk about a delicate matter, she does it with so much details that, if not be for her ability to write romance, it could be almost like read a clinical papers. And instead reading this book, I was involved by the characters and not distracted by the details. Kyle is the young baker of Cattle Valley. He is from a wealthy family but he has left his comfort life after a bad accident which has left him tetraplegic. Even if Gill has proved in every way his interest in Kyle, he is still reluctant to start a relationship with the man, cause he seems not to be able to have a normal sexual life and his day-to-day needs are so embarassing for him, he has no desire to share them with another man. But Gill is very stubborn and he will not let go until he has not conviced Kyle to give him a chance. Even if Kyle should be the protagonist of the story, and usually I have a soft spot for the bottom, I think that Gill steals a bit the scene this time. Gill is a big Afro American man, with a big heart, and he is very tender and caring. He is almost too good to be true. Only one question remains in my mind... why the title, Sweet Topping? Maybe cause Gill is a sweet man? http://www.amazon.com/dp/1906590346/?tag=elimyrevandra-20 aucune critique | ajouter une critique
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HTML: Wheelchair-bound, Kyle Brynn loves his home above the bakery he owns and runs. He's proud of everything he's managed to accomplish since the accident six years ago that took the use of his legs. At the age of twenty-six he's an independent man living on his own, despite the protests from his family. However, with his independence comes loneliness. It's not the townspeople's fault that they see him as less of a man, it's his. Darshawn 'Gill' Gilling quit professional football at the height of his career without a word to the press as to why. Now settled in Cattle Valley, Gill's happy running his garage and gas station. His life is much easier since coming out of the closet to his friends and family. He just wishes he'd had someone to come out for. Most folks in town tend to be a little awestruck when Gill comes around, but if he wanted fans he'd have stayed in football. What he really wants is that cute little baker down the street. Reader Advisory: This book is best read in sequence as part of a series See the book trailer for this story here .Aucune description trouvée dans une bibliothèque |
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