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Chargement... Mango Bob (Mango Bob, #1) (édition 2012)par Bill Myers
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Inscrivez-vous à LibraryThing pour découvrir si vous aimerez ce livre Actuellement, il n'y a pas de discussions au sujet de ce livre. OMG... I already HAVE an RV.. I don't need an instruction manual. I got this book.. and the second one as well, because it came so highly recommended. But I'm not sure I can even finish the first one. When I came across 'should of', rather than 'should have'... I thought perhaps this was the author's way of conveying a quirk of the character. But shortly after that, I came to the word get's... yes, get, with an apostrophe s. This totally took me out of the book, as I tried to figure out if there was any circumstance under which get's could be correct. Beyond that, the author insists on starting a new dialogue paragraph for each new line said by a character. This forced me to pay attention to quotation marks, to see if each line was said by the same character, or a different character. This was made worse by the fact that the quote marks weren't always done properly. With some good dev. editing (to cut much of the detailed RV instructions), and some significant line editing, this might be a good read. Without that editing, it's not worth reading. Frankly, I'm glad I did this as a Kindle Unlimited book, so that I can return it, unread. ( ) aucune critique | ajouter une critique
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